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    Flame | offlineLv1 | Expired Date:2009.04.22 01:24

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Hey ya!

I've been inspired to write a simple poem and then translate it into Chinese. I decided to use short sentences since my Chinese is no where near fluent. Tell me what you think. What corrections are needed?

 

xiexie

 

English:                         Chinese:

Chase                           zhuizhu

OR                               huozhe

Space                           kongjian    

 

Love you                      ai ni ma

OR                               huozhe

Like you                       xihuan ma

 

Forever                        yizhi

OR                              huozhe

Never                          congwei

 

Hmmmmm                    Hmmmmm

I can not say I love you   Bu neng shou wo ai ni

Moving on...                  Fangjian

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牙牙 | offline Lv1 | Answer Date:2009.04.15 15:08 (0) | (0)

English:                         Chinese:

Chase                             紧紧相随                   jin jin xiang sui

OR                                 还是                        hai shi

Space                             保持距离                   bao chi ju li

 

Love you                         爱你                         ai ni

OR                                 还是                         hai shi

Like you                          喜欢你                      xi huan ni

 

Forever                           永远持续                    yong yuan chi xu

OR                                 还是                         hai shi

Never                             从未记起                    cong wei ji qi

 

Hmmmmm                        Hmmmmm                   ....

I can not say I love you     我不能说爱你                wo bu neng shuo ai ni

Moving on...                    却无法放弃(只好继续)     que wu fa fang qi(zhi hao ji xu)

 

这是我对这首诗的理解。。。不知道你满意么?

cuimianqu | offline Lv1 | Answer Date:2009.04.02 16:04 (0) | (0)

Chase                          亦步亦趋

OR                              还是

Space                          保持距离    

 

Love you                     爱你

OR                              还是

Like you                       喜欢你

 

Forever                        不弃不离

OR                              还是

Never                          就此不提

 

Hmmmmm                      Hmmmmm

I can not say I love you  不能说我爱你

Moving on...                  却不停息

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